Victor's Superhero Story.
Nov 26, 2015 20:06:09 GMT -6
Post by Deleted on Nov 26, 2015 20:06:09 GMT -6
A/N: Rewriting an old story so I can sharpen my skills.
Krahno = Defects' name
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Episode 1 - The Krel and the Krude
On planet Krude, one of the unknown dwarf planets somewhere in the milkyway, the planet is at war with an unknown force, The Krel!
The planets' inhabitants 'The Krude' are at the point of extinction due to the force of the Krel!
The Krel are a robotic force led by the 'Master Computer' using weapons unknown to the Krude. The Krude are the Inhabitants of planet Krude, a planet far from the sun. It is naturally cold, thus the inhabitants are cold blooded. The men and women alike are usually somewhat muscular.
They are usually born with white hair and blue skin, though there is a disease that affects the birth of new children which can result in a 'defect'. These defects aren't unlike an average human. Though they have the same skin and hair as their race, they are warm blooded and have far more intellect than the average human, though they usually die at birth due to the cold or bad parenting.
There was one that was different though, one that would change the world of Krude as they knew it.
Episode 2 - Before the Storm
*In the southern reaches of Krude, in the mountain region of Krog lay a small mountain town where a proud father and happy mother of two boys to be named an hour after birth.*
Krulla: They will be named Krahno and Kaiser.
Kruel: I expect them to be great warriors one day.
*Krahno seemed to be less muscular than Kaiser as well as shivering from the cold. His mother Krulla now worried wrapped Krahno in blanket to keep him warm.*
Krulla: Oh! What is wrong Krahno are you feeling sick?
*Kaiser like most Krude infants didn't suffer from the cold but wanted attention nonetheless.*
Krulla: There there Kaiser it will be alright.
*Krulla said as she cuddled them both in her arms*
*The father who was best known as Commander Kruel didn't like this sign. His firstborn was a defect!*
Kruel: Bah! Why did Krahno have to be born a defect! He's worthless! Simply worthless!
Krulla: He may be born a defect but that does not mean he cannot be a great warrior!
*As he left the house in disgust he knew that putting a defect in the army would lead to Krude's downfall.*
Kruel: That's Impossible!
*But he knew if he didn't raise the boy he would be scorned by his wife and everyone else on this small planet.
So after thinking about it he finally accepted.*
Kruel: Tsh! Fine he can stay. But he has no place in my army!
Episode 3 - The Chosen Defect
*As the years passed Krahno learned more by studying alone in his home away from the others in the Krude army who neglected him.*
Krulla: Good morning Krahno I made you some lovely Tuna for breakfast!
Krahno: That sounds great Mother! Do you have any news from Father about the war?
*Krulla smiled as she put Krahno's plate beside him as he studied.*
Krulla: Not well from what he has told me. The Krel seem to have the advantage and their numbers outmatch our own.
*Krahno stood up quickly as he heard this news*
Krahno: Isn't it dangerous for you to be getting me this food in these hard times?
Krulla: We are a warrior people son I can handle myself just fine.
Krahno: Are you sure? I mean you could get hurt or worse!
*Krulla hugged her son Krahno*
Krulla: I'll be fine. Now please eat your breakfast before it gets cold.
*Krahno perked up a smile as he began to eat his tuna*
Krahno: Thank you Mom!
The Tuna was just at the right temperature due to cooling off after being cooked in the hot fire.
*Knock* *Knock*
Krulla opened the door to see her younger but much more muscular son Kaiser at the door. He had been collecting parts of the Krel for Krahno to study no doubt.
As Kaiser rushed in with a pile of Krel parts Krahno's face lit up as he saw his brother Kaiser alive and well but also helping with Krahno's curiosity towards the Krel.
Kaiser: Todays' battle was quite difficult I don't think i would have beaten them without your advice on them Big Bro!
*Kaiser dumped the pile in front of Krahno*
Krahno: Well It wasn't too hard to figure out that the power conduit was located in the Krel's back so disabling that means that the krel can no longer function.
*Kaiser rubbed his head as Krulla chuckled*
Kaiser: Can you say that in something I understand?
*Krahno sighed as he forgot about his superb intellect at times*
Krahno: You kill them by hitting them on the back. Does that clear things up?
Kaiser: Okay i understand that!
*Krahno looks over the parts he was brought and studies them*
Krahno: So it seems the Krel are getting smarter. It seems that the larger sized Krel have the power conduit located in the cranium and not the back of the torso.
Kaiser: So in other words?
*Krahno smirked*
Krahno: You hit the big ones on the head so they go boom.
Kaiser: Ohh okay!
*Kaiser pondered a bit after taking in this knowledge*
Kaiser: Bro! With your knowledge on the krel we can win this war!
*Krulla knew this was true ever since his first discovery on the krel but Kruel was too stubborn to let the boy in.*
Kaiser: Let's at least try!
Episode 4 - Into the Army
Eventually Kaiser helped his older brother get into the Krude army after much persuasion to their father. The Krude in the army weren't to thrilled either but it was Krahno's intellect and map making that helped the Army advance further into enemy territory and learn more about the Krel.
This continued on as the battles progressed with Krahno giving the krude army a tactical advantage as the hard to impress Commander Kruel started to see Krahno differently, no longer as worthless son but as a fellow officer in the Krude army. As the final battle approached Krahno lead a splinter group to the Master Computer as the main army took down the main force as a distraction where the final battle would take place.
Episode 5 - A Heavy Burden
It seemed easy at first but the Master Computer wasn't totally defenseless on its own as many traps were sprung launching javelins and other sharp weapons into the defenders of the splinter group killing some of Krude's finest in the aftermath. There was no time to remorse as they had to shut down the Master Computer with the remaining force protecting the brothers and Kruel. Kruel lead a charge against the robots that defended the Master Computer as Kaiser stuck by his brother as Krahno started to use his knowledge of the Krel to shut down the master computer.
Krahno messed up badly when entering the wrong code and a javelin launched out toward Kaiser. Kruel not wanting his finest soldier and son to die as he pushed Kaiser out of the way of the Javelin only to get Impaled himself. Krahno then successfully shut down the Master Computer but not without loss as the remaining soldiers had no knowledge of medicine or healing as Kruel said his final words to his sons telling them that Kaiser would now lead the Krude and telling Krahno he was sorry for everything and gave Krahno the job of making Krude a better place.
Episode 6 - The Journey
Years later Krahno's inventions were well known around Krude but the Krude could not survive simply on cold water fish and water. They also had no medical skills and this disturbed Krahno as he set off to do his father's last request of him, to make Krude a better place. Using the parts of the Krel he built a successful rocket and set off to find other planets for help.
Knowing little about space Krahno set off toward a similar planet to his own one that would be very cold but also uninhabited. As Krahno ventured through space many of the planets were uninhabitable without an ecosystem to sustain him. After about a week of traveling Krahno came upon a small red planet with two moons Krahno dubbed 'Alpha 01' as the planet was very hot and close to the sun but also able to support life, Krahno then set course for landing on 'Alpha 01' right away.
Episode 7 - Welcome to Meiru (WIP)
Krahno = Defects' name
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Episode 1 - The Krel and the Krude
On planet Krude, one of the unknown dwarf planets somewhere in the milkyway, the planet is at war with an unknown force, The Krel!
The planets' inhabitants 'The Krude' are at the point of extinction due to the force of the Krel!
The Krel are a robotic force led by the 'Master Computer' using weapons unknown to the Krude. The Krude are the Inhabitants of planet Krude, a planet far from the sun. It is naturally cold, thus the inhabitants are cold blooded. The men and women alike are usually somewhat muscular.
They are usually born with white hair and blue skin, though there is a disease that affects the birth of new children which can result in a 'defect'. These defects aren't unlike an average human. Though they have the same skin and hair as their race, they are warm blooded and have far more intellect than the average human, though they usually die at birth due to the cold or bad parenting.
There was one that was different though, one that would change the world of Krude as they knew it.
Episode 2 - Before the Storm
*In the southern reaches of Krude, in the mountain region of Krog lay a small mountain town where a proud father and happy mother of two boys to be named an hour after birth.*
Krulla: They will be named Krahno and Kaiser.
Kruel: I expect them to be great warriors one day.
*Krahno seemed to be less muscular than Kaiser as well as shivering from the cold. His mother Krulla now worried wrapped Krahno in blanket to keep him warm.*
Krulla: Oh! What is wrong Krahno are you feeling sick?
*Kaiser like most Krude infants didn't suffer from the cold but wanted attention nonetheless.*
Krulla: There there Kaiser it will be alright.
*Krulla said as she cuddled them both in her arms*
*The father who was best known as Commander Kruel didn't like this sign. His firstborn was a defect!*
Kruel: Bah! Why did Krahno have to be born a defect! He's worthless! Simply worthless!
Krulla: He may be born a defect but that does not mean he cannot be a great warrior!
*As he left the house in disgust he knew that putting a defect in the army would lead to Krude's downfall.*
Kruel: That's Impossible!
*But he knew if he didn't raise the boy he would be scorned by his wife and everyone else on this small planet.
So after thinking about it he finally accepted.*
Kruel: Tsh! Fine he can stay. But he has no place in my army!
Episode 3 - The Chosen Defect
*As the years passed Krahno learned more by studying alone in his home away from the others in the Krude army who neglected him.*
Krulla: Good morning Krahno I made you some lovely Tuna for breakfast!
Krahno: That sounds great Mother! Do you have any news from Father about the war?
*Krulla smiled as she put Krahno's plate beside him as he studied.*
Krulla: Not well from what he has told me. The Krel seem to have the advantage and their numbers outmatch our own.
*Krahno stood up quickly as he heard this news*
Krahno: Isn't it dangerous for you to be getting me this food in these hard times?
Krulla: We are a warrior people son I can handle myself just fine.
Krahno: Are you sure? I mean you could get hurt or worse!
*Krulla hugged her son Krahno*
Krulla: I'll be fine. Now please eat your breakfast before it gets cold.
*Krahno perked up a smile as he began to eat his tuna*
Krahno: Thank you Mom!
The Tuna was just at the right temperature due to cooling off after being cooked in the hot fire.
*Knock* *Knock*
Krulla opened the door to see her younger but much more muscular son Kaiser at the door. He had been collecting parts of the Krel for Krahno to study no doubt.
As Kaiser rushed in with a pile of Krel parts Krahno's face lit up as he saw his brother Kaiser alive and well but also helping with Krahno's curiosity towards the Krel.
Kaiser: Todays' battle was quite difficult I don't think i would have beaten them without your advice on them Big Bro!
*Kaiser dumped the pile in front of Krahno*
Krahno: Well It wasn't too hard to figure out that the power conduit was located in the Krel's back so disabling that means that the krel can no longer function.
*Kaiser rubbed his head as Krulla chuckled*
Kaiser: Can you say that in something I understand?
*Krahno sighed as he forgot about his superb intellect at times*
Krahno: You kill them by hitting them on the back. Does that clear things up?
Kaiser: Okay i understand that!
*Krahno looks over the parts he was brought and studies them*
Krahno: So it seems the Krel are getting smarter. It seems that the larger sized Krel have the power conduit located in the cranium and not the back of the torso.
Kaiser: So in other words?
*Krahno smirked*
Krahno: You hit the big ones on the head so they go boom.
Kaiser: Ohh okay!
*Kaiser pondered a bit after taking in this knowledge*
Kaiser: Bro! With your knowledge on the krel we can win this war!
*Krulla knew this was true ever since his first discovery on the krel but Kruel was too stubborn to let the boy in.*
Kaiser: Let's at least try!
Episode 4 - Into the Army
Eventually Kaiser helped his older brother get into the Krude army after much persuasion to their father. The Krude in the army weren't to thrilled either but it was Krahno's intellect and map making that helped the Army advance further into enemy territory and learn more about the Krel.
This continued on as the battles progressed with Krahno giving the krude army a tactical advantage as the hard to impress Commander Kruel started to see Krahno differently, no longer as worthless son but as a fellow officer in the Krude army. As the final battle approached Krahno lead a splinter group to the Master Computer as the main army took down the main force as a distraction where the final battle would take place.
Episode 5 - A Heavy Burden
It seemed easy at first but the Master Computer wasn't totally defenseless on its own as many traps were sprung launching javelins and other sharp weapons into the defenders of the splinter group killing some of Krude's finest in the aftermath. There was no time to remorse as they had to shut down the Master Computer with the remaining force protecting the brothers and Kruel. Kruel lead a charge against the robots that defended the Master Computer as Kaiser stuck by his brother as Krahno started to use his knowledge of the Krel to shut down the master computer.
Krahno messed up badly when entering the wrong code and a javelin launched out toward Kaiser. Kruel not wanting his finest soldier and son to die as he pushed Kaiser out of the way of the Javelin only to get Impaled himself. Krahno then successfully shut down the Master Computer but not without loss as the remaining soldiers had no knowledge of medicine or healing as Kruel said his final words to his sons telling them that Kaiser would now lead the Krude and telling Krahno he was sorry for everything and gave Krahno the job of making Krude a better place.
Episode 6 - The Journey
Years later Krahno's inventions were well known around Krude but the Krude could not survive simply on cold water fish and water. They also had no medical skills and this disturbed Krahno as he set off to do his father's last request of him, to make Krude a better place. Using the parts of the Krel he built a successful rocket and set off to find other planets for help.
Knowing little about space Krahno set off toward a similar planet to his own one that would be very cold but also uninhabited. As Krahno ventured through space many of the planets were uninhabitable without an ecosystem to sustain him. After about a week of traveling Krahno came upon a small red planet with two moons Krahno dubbed 'Alpha 01' as the planet was very hot and close to the sun but also able to support life, Krahno then set course for landing on 'Alpha 01' right away.
Episode 7 - Welcome to Meiru (WIP)